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Lord Shen probably already has 1000 different fan MTG card versions.
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~13-Nyx Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How it deals 6 damage?
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!JohnFaa Mar 1, 2012  Student Writer
Once.
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~13-Nyx Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
But how it does it?
When it comes into play? When the third artifact comes into play? When you tap it?
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!JohnFaa Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
I think it is imediately after the third artifact comes into play.
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~13-Nyx Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Then it should read like:
Metalcraft - When an artifact comes into play, if you control exactly three artifacts ~ deals 6 damage to target player or creature.
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~soy-monk Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The sole creature type of Bird seems a bit lacking. I looked up updated texts for the old Three Kingdoms cards and it seems like it would be more logical for Shen to be a Bird Advisor or Bird Soldier.

The phrasing on his new Metalcraft ability seems a bit awkward too. When is the 6 damage dealt? At the beginning of his controller's upkeep? When he taps? I'm not sure what's going on there.
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!JohnFaa Jan 30, 2012  Student Writer
"Bird Advisor" seems the most correct title, since soldier generally implies a lower rank than he actually wields.

The 6 damage thing was sort of an instant like ability, to be used once, but I think I will change it to +6/0.
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~13-Nyx Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think Bird Warrior fits better.
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~soy-monk Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd say +6/+0 would be a tad too much if it weren't for that fact that he's a 3/3 for 6. I could definitely see that working :)
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